Notes October 2009

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #35

I want to make the ship a character in the novel. The choice was whether to make the vessel historical or magical, and in deciding to give the ship a speaking role, for want of a better phrase, I'm plumping for the latter. Nevertheless, the ship's general appearance will be rooted in the era, by contrast and comparison: basically, a hybrid sailing and galley ship, with three masts carrying lateen sails. I have some rough ideas in respect of its design. The guests 'quarters' will be located underneath the cabin's 'cabin' just forward of the stern, accessed by a spiral staircase on the main deck behind. The 12 guests' quarters will be along a narrow corridor, 6 on either side, with the servant/slave quarters under the staircase and a door to the crew/galley decks at the other end. This latter door can only be accessed from the guests' side using a key hung up beside it. At night, the door leads to magical places, and the adventures therein involving al-Idrisi and other guests will provide exposition for various characters, with the magical realities evoked pertinent to such an exposition.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #34

I’ve just been reading some of Abu Nuwas‘ poems, in R. Irwin’s The Penguin Anthology of Classical Arabic Literature (London: Penguin, 2006). I gather he was (and is) something of a folklore figure — a trickster. I’m beginning to appreciate how tricksterism brings absurd cultural mores into sharp relief, and in that role is the mother of Swift’s darker satirical impulses. Somehow, I want The Mapmaker – perhaps through al-Idrisi’s Vardøger (rather than evil twin) –to evoke that troubling but ludicrously funny spirit.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #33 

I was hoping that The Jaariya could be attacked by pirates along the way, but there was one big problem - what kind of pirates were sailing the med in 1149? Probably quite a few kinds, actually, including Byzantium thugs, but information on them is thin on the ground compared to the earlier Andalusian pirates who set up shop on the South French coast, or the much later Corsairs. By chance, I have a discovered a more local and contemporaneous group of pirates, with a history of picking on Christian shipping: the Zirids, Berber rulers of Ifriqiya. However, by 1149, the Zirid dynasty pretty much had its ars against the harbour wall, due to none other than Roger II himself, who was in the process of capturing most of their kingdom, focusing particularly on the ports. However, it would be quite plausible to summon up one or two stragglers still loyal to the last Zirid ruler, Abul-Hasan al-Hasan ibn Ali - who was officially top Zirid until 1152. Interestingly, Abul-Hasan outlived his political dynasty's demise, final leaving this world in 1171.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #32 

There would seem to be another theme emerging, and one which suggests others: that of social class. The class system which emerged in the occident in the medieval period, notably in England, contrasts with the relatively egalitarian culture of the Islamicate in the Early Middle Period. This is an issue which has contemporary resonances. I also think it's one which demands critical evaluation.

In my view, class still pervades British society - but I don't think 'class' as Marx defined it here. Marx may have defined a new facet of class in Britain, one which emerged as a result of industrialization, but this was as much created by the development of a politicised class consciousness. But this merely intruded on the class formations that had developed from the Middle Ages. My thesis is this: the medieval class system in England, which was multilayered and largely centred around particular institutional forms, is mirrored in contemporary 'employment cultures'. I think Savage hints at this in his analysis, but the problem is that class tends to be something discussed sociologically or, if historically, then eurocentrically.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #31 

Humour is important in The Mapmaker. I want al-Idrisi to be a wry, rather acidic narrator. He starts off world-weary, but events and friendship change him. I want there to be a certain amount of bawdiness, especially surrounding the Danish brothers. Satire? Perhaps - but directed at things al-Idrisi thinks are deserving of it - violence and power being his key targets. But other than satire, is there any way of drawing on the humour of the time and culture and incorporating it into the novel. Step one is finding about the same. Clearing some of the poets of the time were quite funny, and some of the stories were (Arabian nights). All in all, I think humour has to emerge from character and situation.

But here's an interesting find: Mubeen, H. (2008) Humour and Comedy in Arabic Literature (From the Birth of Islam to Ottoman Period) Al-Hikmat Volume 28, pp. 13-30 -- ironically, amusement may be derived from Mubeen's bloody awful English, particularly his struggle with the definite article.

One thing I want to include - hyperbole, and an impressionistic rather than empirical approach to recounting experiences, but apparent to a lesser or greater degree in other characters, but not al-Idrisi -- who gets accused of being "a boring little cunt" by one of the Varangian Guards.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #30 

I have consciously avoided adding Ibn Battuta to my reading list. I've read enough of Dunn's translation to conclude that, in researching this particularly project, a re-reading isn't required. I don't actually like Ibn Battuta, the person and I want al-Idrisi to be a completely different person. I also want to avoid Ibn Fadlan because he belongs to almost another era (10th century), plus his journey became the basis for a catatonia-inducing novel by Michael Crichton and an equally dire film based on the same.

Ditto Nasir Khusraw (Persian).

The same cannot be said for Ibn Jubayr - he was a geographer, and was born in 1145, while al-Idrisi was still alive. I am thus bound to add a translation of his travel writings to the core research bibliography.

Broadhurst, R. [Trans and Ed.] (1952/1990) The Travels of Ibn Jubayr (India: Goodword Books)

I've relegated a few books on the core list to reference and Watt's book on the influence of Islam on Europe has been chucked off the list completely -- it's dated, and I'm primarily interested in the influence of Islamic narrative forms on European culture, which is intrinsic to the novel by the dint of the place it gives story and stories. However, there is one historical hole missing - Byzantium:

Norwich, J. J. (1996) Byzantium: The Decline and Fall (London: Penguin)

And I've added another contemporary account, by Usamah ibn Murshid ibn Munqidh

Hitti, P. (2000) An Arab-Syrian Gentleman and Warrior in the Period of the Crusades: Memoirs of Usamah Ibn-Munqidh: New Edition (Columbia: Columbia University Press)

I'll read the two primary sources next, insha Allah -- as follow up to Hodgson's and Lindsay's histories.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #29 

How fantastic should The Mapmaker be? The incorporation of fantasy elements will only work if they pertain to the era/story. Hence, automata (which were popular enough to provoke a compendium of them to be published in the early 13th century). Importantly, fantasy elements pertaining to more abstract facets of 12th century culture, such as Sufism, are equally admissible. What I want to avoid at all costs is hackneyed Arabian nights 'abracadabraism'. Absolutely NO flying carpets, bottled genies or doors that respond to the command open fucking sesame!!! Any kind of magical fantasy must have a sense of wonder attached to it, hence such elements should be original or at the very least unusual.

The crew - two futuwwah, two shifts: night/day. How do they sail safely at night? Using an oil powered lamp on the bow of the ship, perhaps? Or luminous fish?

Thomas Strutt - occidental corporativism, thus have him resembling (if a little symbolically) a gothic cathedral, e.g. give him what looks like a golden spire hat, but turns out to be a horn made of gold. The onocentaur is a cousin of the unicorn, or perhaps a "fallen" unicorn. Also, dramatic conflict between this cultural attitude and Islamic contractualism.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #28 

Approximately 68 000 words of 33 chapters.
31 chapters each of 2000 words, 2 chapters (introduction, endpiece) of 3000 words.
On the format I write with, that amounts to about 9 pages for longer chapters, 6 for the shorter.

Listing chapter notes in tabulated form.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #27 

Thomas Strutt is an onocentaur (human head and chest, everything else donkey):

...only no one knows this because he is the kind of onocentaur with just two donkey legs, and the hoof prints provide a mystery for al-Idrisi (detective story subplot).

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #26 

Journey time: 01 Sha'ban 0543 - 01 Ramadan 0543 (15 December 1148 - 13 January 1149).
Book starts on the evening of 01 Sha'ban 0543, 14 Dec. 1148,
and goes up to 01 Ramadan 0543, 13 Jan. 1149.
NB: 14 Sha'ban - Laylat al-bara'a: Night of Remembrance.

This would put them in the Bay of Biscay in the stormy season, and see a sufficiently dramatic contrast in temperatures. According to stats (see below), average global temperatures and precipitation were normal, so we'll work on that assumption.

Palermo December: average high: 16°C; average low: 12°C.
Bristol, December: average high: 8°C; average low: 4°C.

So it would seem reasonable to see the Jaariya leave Palermo on a bright, breezy, sunny 16°C day and arrive in Bristol to a bracing, grey, rainy/sleeting 4°C.

Abbasid Caliph: Al-Muqtafi.
Byzantine Emperor: Manuel I Komnenos aka Manuel The Great (not friends with Roger II).
Patriarch of Constantinople: Nicholas IV Muzalon.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #25 

The weather:

Source: http://www.longrangeweather.com/1100ad.htm

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #24

Reinaud, J. T., Haroon Khan Sherwani [Trans] (1955) Muslim Colonies in France, Northern Italy and Switzerland (Pakistan : Sh. Muhammad Ashraf) - for reference purposes only.

Probably sufficient information at this website: http://www.geocities.com/athens/troy/4040/pirates.htm

Not sure how historically accurate the linked narrative is - Troubadours in the 10th century? Is that too early? But it's too early for our pirates.

What about Crusader pirates? NO - because Christians controlled Mediterranean sea lanes in 12th century, so more likely to be Muslim pirates. What about Byzantine pirates?

 

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #23 

A couple more random ideas:

  • The ship will be powered along the underground canal using automata;

  • al-Idrisi will employ the metaphoric style of al-Ma'arri (973-1057/8)

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #22 

Abolqasem Ferdowsi, Dick Davis [Trans] (2007) Shahnameh: The Persian Book of Kings (Penguin Classics)Here's an important quote From Hodgson, Volume 2:

"In the Islamic Middle Periods, as the whole population from Nile to Oxus shared in a common culture in which the religious dimension as such was only one of the common ingredients, the image of the adventurous hero as the ideal man come to play such a role." (p.155)

And this "...image of the adventurous hero found its most influential form in the Iranian heroic tradition." (p.155)

Al -Idrisi would likely have been familiar with Shahnameh (Book of Kings), by Firdawsi (935–1020), a poetic opus written around 1000 AD, telling the mythical and historical past of Persia from the creation of the world up until the Islamic conquest of Persia in the 7th century.

So what about making al-Idrisi's narrative a wannabe hero narrative, but where it is hard to know whether he's telling the truth or not? Especially with the preface opening about meeting the traveller as a child, who teaches him to doubt most second-hand accounts of places in favour of looking (empiricism).

Antarah -- Arabic, see translation of Hanged Poem.
Rustam/Rostam -- Persian, see Shahnameh (Book of Kings), by Firdawsi.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #21 

I realise now that everyday life (including maritime life) needs to be a much more prominent part of the research: everything from units of measurement to toileting to taxation. In fact, in order to effectively research the cultural milieu, the starting point may often be the everyday. Knowing, for example, that merchant trade was a defining economic activity of the era, compared to land or manufacturing investment (and why), provides an important clue to the mindset of people living in that region and time.

"...the overall pattern of the economy remained that of local subsistence in the countryside and individual craftwork in the towns, capped by extraction of revenue from the peasantry for the benefit of an increasingly military class and its dependents." (Hodgson Volume 2, 1977, p.140)

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #20 

A few stray ideas:

Caravanserai courtyard

  • Caravanserai at sea (in keeping the architecture etc of land-based caravanserais.

  • The 99 crew have cuttlefish swords.

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #19

In a post on the Cultural Anarchlyst, I postulated a structure in order to focus reading research for my intended novel. However, this structure has started to evolve, such the relationship between what I am reading and what I intend to write is becoming increasingly complex. The linear model of one book at a time is breaking down as ideas start to gather pace.

For example, while reading Marshall Hodgson’s “The Venture of Islam: Volume 2″ (Chicago University Press, 1977), I’ve concluded the outline development of a set of core characters. But fleshing out characters also demands additional reading. Take Abraham Ibn Ezra. He is based on a real person of the same name, necessitating further reading in itself (not that easy), but I also want to contrast him with the slightly aloof, cynical, savant al-Idrisi. I want some tension to exist between them.

One idea was that Ezra might be a private farter, to the extent that Ezra’s cabin reeks of farts, much to Idrisi’s rather pompous disdain (and the disgusted amusement of his streetwise servant, Dwadar). But would passengers have “cabins” on a 12th century Arab-Norman vessel, and if so, what kind? Would they be stuffy? To discover that, I will need to read something like Dionisius A. Agius’s “Classic Ships of Islam” (Brill, 2007). I haven’t yet purchased Agius, primarily due to the fact it’s currently selling for approximately £90. For that price, it ought to write the novel for me.

CODA: I think I’ve found a much cheaper and more regionally appropriate alternative to Agius’s doorstep: John H. Pryor’s “Geography, Technology, and War: Studies in the Maritime History of the Mediterranean, 649-1571″ (Cambridge University Press, 1992).

THE MAPMAKER: Research Item #18

The 99 crew, who are each name Abdul + one of the 99 names, to be divided into two rival futuwwah, one called Tanzih and Tashbih!

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